Muse Margaret called - she's very invested in this book - it's funny. She felt I needed to add one more little thing, just to make sure one of the characters always remains sympathetic to the reader, owning up to an early mistake the character makes and taking responsibility. We found a place for it that actually worked in part two of the book and I added three very short sentences and she liked them bunches and it helps actually because I tagged it onto a paragraph consisting of two short sentences - I'd cut what followed it, so it was good to add it.
