I've been up since ten, but I guess I had the work session time wrong - it must be noon. I had another telephone call from Richard Sherman, so I could write down the adjusted lyric - interestingly he did what I'd started to do in the bridge and then stopped - wrote two more lines. Otherwise, he just deleted one word in each verse to make it scan with the tune he wrote, and he added one penultimate line to each verse. I can already play and hum the first four lines, that's how catchy it is. He's coming over on Sunday and I'll record it into Ye Olde iPhone.